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Re: YWS Recent Books Debate
:coughs: Um, I'm not trying to sound like an authority here, but nominations go in the nomination thread. This is the debate. The nominations are clogging it up. Thank you. ...
Apr 28, 2007 -
Re: Eragon
Chris Paolini wrote: The real torture with Eragon came in the editing. I discovered that editing is really another word for someone ruthlessly tearing apart your work with a big ...
Apr 28, 2007 -
Re: Diamonds of the Dawn
:jawdrop: Brilliant! It had good rhyming, rhythm and everything... (why can't I be like that! :p ) The only thing that doesn't fit is the "compass rose/close" thing. If you ...
Apr 21, 2007 -
Re: YWS Classics Debate
Ha! I've got you all beat with 38...and a lot of them are series, too! A lot of these are great books, but some of them are...I just don't understand ...
Apr 20, 2007 -
Re: Poem - rip the veil
Nothing wrong with stanza one, except the missing capitalization. That seems to be a trend throughout the poem. "take reality, /the dirt beneath your feet as it hums with spring ...
Apr 19, 2007 -
Re: Poem - After the Rain
It's very interesting. Firstly: What in the world is a "protion" in the third stanza? I'm thinking it's a typo for protein or portion, but which? Secondly: In the first ...
Apr 19, 2007 -
Re: The YWS Classics List Nominations
Oz books (ALL Oz books) by Frank L. Baum Pride and Prejudice , Jane Austen The Count of Monte Cristo Alexandre Dumas Rebecca , Daphne du Maurier A Christmas Carol ...
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: The YWS Recent Books List Nominations
Old Man's War , John Scalzi Ender's Game , Orson Scott Card The Squire, His Knight and His Lady Gerald Morris Harry Potter , J.K. Rowling My Sister's Keeper , ...
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: Ode to A Stale Pastry
I love it. I love it. I read the first line and my mouth dropped open and I started shrieking with laughter. *yes, I am easily amused. Sue me* I ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Peeling Away the Wallpaper
It has a very nice rhythm theme in it- though it wanders a bit. We're talking about wallpaper and suddenly you say something about churches and insecurities. And then bells. ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Curlicues and Pirouettes
It flows very smoothly, except for here: "With unknown grace/The ink seeped out/But never too too much/She could stop,/she knew she could/Control the gentle touch" That is too choppy, it ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon: Destiny Revival
Wow....this is very nicely written. At first, at the description of the unknown character, I thought it might be Pluto. Dare I ask if that is true? She's the senshi ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: I'm no Superhero
I like it. "Lois Lane" and "Mary Jane" lines I particularly liked. But I can give you my heart, My attention and my soul. I can listen to your words ...
Mar 19, 2007 -
Re: The Hidden Usergroup
Can I just get away with saying, "I laughed so hard soda shot out of my nose"? No? Darn. I just wish you'd update soon and that we'll find out ...
Mar 11, 2007 -
Re: HELLBOUND - its not as cool as it sounds..
Aside from numerous grammatical and capitalization errors, I see an interesting story behind this if there's more. It's kind of hard to read behind all the typos- run that baby ...
Mar 11, 2007
